Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Work is an indispensable part of adult life and a topic that often gets talked about in daily conversation. Some make the pragmatic argument that in the uncertain job market, security ought to be valued over satisfaction. From my perspective, those with families can not be reproached for this view but it is generally more important to enjoy your job and spread goodwill.
Workers with independents rightly value a consistent paycheck and benefits over all other factors. If someone is starting out in a labor of love such as becoming an artist, they may struggle initially to bring home enough money to make ends meet. They could not send their offspring to a good educational institution, live in a good neighborhood, and keep everyone in the house reasonably well-clothed or feed. Even if they can manage that, it will place incredible stress on not only them but also their spouse and children. In fact, research has shown these deeply ingrained anxieties from childhood can persist throughout adulthood.
On the other hand, it is nonetheless more important to pursue a job that is fulfilling. The vast majority of the world dislike their job, and a large percentage of them have difficulty reconciling frustrations with their day-to-day temperament. An unhappy employee is more likely to be short with their co-workers, complain with friends, and resent their family for the burden they must shoulder for their welfare. More of this person's daily interactionS will be negatives and adds up over years to create the greatest global repository of ill will. Free up the same person to enjoy their job and there is a strong chance they can suddenly brighten the days of those around them.
In conclusion, although some argue that a secure job is more important than a satisfying job, I am of the opinion that we should always look for a job that brings us happiness and fulfillment rather than stability.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, nonetheless, so, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83240180765 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61875 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8263831174 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.571428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286980093795 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0990969782179 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119564442917 0.0667982634062 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202803790762 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131549298186 0.056905535591 231% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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