Some people argue that job satisfaction is more important than job security, while others believe that they cannot always expect job satisfaction and a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
According to some people, it is better to pursue a job that provides satisfaction; others insist that it is even more important to have a stable job that provides a secure source of income. While I do admit that job satisfaction is desirable, in my opinion, finding a secure job that pays well is better than pursuing a labour of love.
Work satisfaction is certainly important in life. If people are happy about their jobs, they do not have to drag themselves to their office every morning. They will happily go because they enjoy the time spend in office. This will increase their efficiency and also eliminate stress from their work life. By contrast, if they are unhappy about their job, the very thought of attending office will kill their joy. This not only makes them unproductive but also saps their energy.
Even so, in my opinion, having a secure job is more important than having a job one loves. This is because work is just one aspect of our life. We have a personal and social life outside our office and if we earn enough, we can find happiness in these areas. For example, people who earn well can provide a better standard of living to their family. They can send their children to the best schools and provide them with the best health care and other necessities of life. Even if they are not particularly happy about their professional life, being able to fulfil the needs of their family will make them happy and satisfied. And when they feel stressed out, they can take a vacation to forget their worries and rejuvenate themselves. By contrast, people who do not earn enough have to constantly worry about meeting their financial obligations. This will actually make them anxious and unhappy even if they are satisfied with their job. Eventually, the constant financial worries will make them detest their job and begin to affect their efficiency at work.
In conclusion, job satisfaction is definitely worth pursuing; however, it is not more important than earning enough. If people have a permanent job that earns them enough, they can fulfil their financial obligations and feel satisfied about their life in general. Hence, if I have to choose between job satisfaction and financial security, I will definitely opt for the latter.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, so, well, while, even so, for example, in conclusion, in general, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86304909561 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54910313783 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462532299742 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 593.1 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5944196856 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.619047619 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274844573856 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10564424669 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113694098466 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236681307351 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.119041976565 0.056905535591 209% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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