Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
it is often argued that while some people think that the purpose of university education is to support graduates get better careers, others think it has many advantages for the community as well as individuals.
This essay will consider the two points of view.
On the one hand, it is believed that tertiary education is crucial to secure better future jobs for many reasons. one important reason is the university programs provide marketable skills and knowledge. most of the companies often hire a person who is well-educated as they can play a vital role in increasing the organization's productivity. Another key factor is generally higher-educated people will get higher pay. If, for example, someone has a master-degree in accounting, they are much more likely to earn a higher salary than who do not have any qualification. Thus, university education is essential for a more secure future and a higher standard of living.
However, there are some several benefits for individuals and society. Firstly, the college education system increases awareness and confidence of individuals. it makes changes in students' attitude, style, thinking, and observation, which help them to become more mature. In addition, it would improve the country's economy because educated workers are able to more efficiently carry out tasks that require literacy and critical thinking. For instance, a recent study found that better-educated employees tend to be more productive than less educated ones. As a result, it has profound impacts on people and the community.
To sum up, it is clear that although education has certain positives on individuals and the country, I do believe that the most and main objective of university education is to acquire the best job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, so, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32857142857 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00502130795 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.6244571014 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345093559628 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105773074776 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725861563255 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169060886527 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07215729523 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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