Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Many people thought that the goal of university learning is to make students have a good chance to get better job opportunities after they graduated, while the viewpoint of other people is the university education have many strong points for the students and the community. I strongly agree with the two notions for various opinions.
The first idea says that target of learning in universities is enables the students graduates to get work easily and speedy by providing them the require information to have the minimum of knowledge that nowadays is very essential in the labor market. And, by allow them to increasing their practical skills across the workshops and training programs that the universities offer.
On the other hand, there are different notions that says the university educational systems have many advantages for both human and community. The first benefit is the university learning provided the society by graduates have knowledge and skills that can satisfy their community needs. The society needs to doctors, engineers and teachers, And the universities graduates only can overcome this needs. The second advantages for the community is reducing the unemployment ratio and eliminate some problems that can be as a result of unemployment such as crimes. Another benefits for human is the individual can feel their importance for their families and society.
In conclusion, I think that the university education have many benefits for individual and community and the benefits for society is weight over human.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34156378601 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80143258388 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506172839506 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5256856931 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.8 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274551618266 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110495717599 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673021016165 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17264631619 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526142744347 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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