Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
The raising children, isn’t vital issue for everyone, right? Each parents even non-parents have idea about raising children. However, they missing one point about this subject.The child is not a your project. If you want to be succeed as a parents you should keep following the specialist relevant childhood.
As i told already, each child is an individual. When they are becoming a good person, you could arrange the time for them. The parents divided in two groups for planing time. One side says, after the school or course the child must remain doing homework. After if they finished more early their homework, they have chance for improving their grade. Thus after break for short time they can make more self-study. Frankly, the child specialist don’t support this attitude.
All child have to lives their childhood, they says. In recently research says, developing child’s brain the gaming time is significant against school age children. Over homework is not solution for have a perfect school life.
And the other side, other parents are know free time how important for kids. This times if could be assemble with art or sport, it will become brain exercise. This meaning they can improving their imagination with music, cinema or soccer. Recently research says, last century has brilliant individual. This individuals are special because they are really successful at their academic life. However they can also sign song, playing football or playing piano.
We can see clearly the different with two sides. More and more homework just gettin be more annoying. Even therefore reason, they won’t be happy in their academic life. We need to encourages our children. If they have an enough free time for find and fun their ability they might be next brilliant children in this century.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
...apos;t vital issue for everyone, right? Each parents even non-parents have idea abou...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...ey missing one point about this subject.The child is not a your project. If you wan...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'a' or 'your'?
Suggestion: a; your
...int about this subject.The child is not a your project. If you want to be succeed as a...
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Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a parent' or simply 'parents'?
Suggestion: a parent; parents
...r project. If you want to be succeed as a parents you should keep following the specialis...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... specialist relevant childhood. As i told already, each child is an individu...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... have chance for improving their grade. Thus after break for short time they can mak...
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Line 7, column 47, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...ild have to lives their childhood, they says. In recently research says, developing ...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... And the other side, other parents are know free time how important for kids. This ...
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Line 11, column 182, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'improve'
Suggestion: improve
...e brain exercise. This meaning they can improving their imagination with music, cinema or...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... last century has brilliant individual. This individuals are special because they ar...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ally successful at their academic life. However they can also sign song, playing footba...
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Line 15, column 186, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'encourage'.
Suggestion: encourage
...appy in their academic life. We need to encourages our children. If they have an enough fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, frankly, however, if, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1537.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21016949153 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46267395307 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583050847458 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 20.2975951904 54% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.1647613425 49.4020404114 41% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.48 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.8 20.7667163134 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.2 7.06120827912 31% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31177404293 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804777137596 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573896261564 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174927712878 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441958270012 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 50.2224549098 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 12.05 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.1190380762 63% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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