Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work.
How do you think children should spend their free time?
It is thought by few that juvenile are having huge leisure time. They opiniate that the most effective way to utilize this time is to give more curriculum work. However, I do not agree with the notion and believe that their are surplus ways to utilize this time more effectively.
Spending time on physical activities is one of the best alternative. Educational institute should promote sports activity among children's because it has numerous benefit. It makes the child more active and healthy. If a student will spend all his time in studying, he will become dull and inactive. Moreover, adopting the healthy habits in the early age ultimately become a life style. Therefore rather than spending whole time on school work, devoting some quality time to fitness is the better option.
Another way to productively use the available time is by having leisure activities with family and friends. Developing a bond with family during childhood plays a vital role for whole life. Devoting time to love ones cultivate the feeling of support, protection and confidence. For example, watching TV with sibling, evening walk with parents helps young ones to gain the insight experience of the life and helpful in developing personality traits. Hence, having the family time is essential for children's to have various life skills.
In conclusion, undoubtedly school work is essential for mental development, but I think that pupils must have the time for their own which can be used for family and friends.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 219, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... agree with the notion and believe that their are surplus ways to utilize this time m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14634146341 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61692655239 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4901918425 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322848172492 0.244688304435 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105320969328 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724822085914 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190835543761 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0667533566067 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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