Some people believe that construction of new public building such as museums, town halls and sporting facilities is more important than renovation of the existing ones, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often debated whether we should construct new museums, city-centres, and sports clubs or restore the contemporary ones. However, in my opinion, old historic buildings are county’s heritage and should be kept alive.
On the one hand, some people agree that with the advancement in the field of technology, construction of modern buildings will produce less waste and use less energy. As a result it reduces our dependence on the natural resources. Furthermore, modern insulators maintain and regulate same temperature for longer durations. Rain and waste water could be purified in-house and utilized for non-drinking purposes, such as flushing the toilets. Solar and wind power plants could be used to generate electricity. In addition they also think that, these advantages of building new public centres will be more cost-efficient in the long run.
Conversely, there are some people who believe that historic buildings should be preserved. I agree with this statement because these heritage buildings are the considered as a refine piece of art and give character to the cities. They also tell us about lifestyle and history of our ancestors. Also, some cities are recognised for their architectural symbols. For instance, Egypt is famous for its pyramids. In fact these attractions aid to generate revenue through tourism. Consequently, the government should invest in regular repairs and maintenance of such buildings. Moreover, new buildings should be designed to compliment them.
In conclusion, although there is a need to conserve natural resources by constructing energy-efficient buildings, I believe historic buildings are our inheritance and should be valued.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: addition,
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...eritage buildings are the considered as a refine piece of art and give character to the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5953307393 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11130798853 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634241245136 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4216274159 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5882352941 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1176470588 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.29411764706 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164162984536 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0473364939952 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462441696304 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101593007193 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0233408311692 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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