Some people believe that a country becomes more interesting and develops faster when its population includes a mixture of different nationalities and cultures .
To what extend do you agree or disagree?
It has been observed that cultural diversification can be estimated to be the most effective way to make the country move towards growth and prosperity. As with the increase of different cultures and religions there would be impact on trade as well surroundings which could enhance unity among people too. I totally agree to the statement mentioned as this has a lot more to do with adaptable enviornment an person prospect.
To begin with , when we talk about cultures consisting of varied traditions, it can cause harmony and unity among people around as they we respect each others traditions and allow one to belief not only in their own tradition or cultures but others to. This sense of belonging will create a sense of respect towards each and ever culture and religion and creates a great environment to live in. Further more, this intensive step towards accepting every religion can also incline in the rate of growth in various aspects as in terms to trading causing great source to GDP growth.
Moreover, when we talk about diversity it shows harmony and peace among people around. As for an instance if we talk about India where we have a great amount of people with different caste, religions and cultures. This not only is effective on nations view-point, but somehow shares a message to each individual to spread peace and sense of unity among children too.Though this can sometimes lead to conflicts to still have can have governance on the same to have certain rules to curb the situations and stating a good example in terms of cultural diversity. With different cultures we can have plethora of job opportunities. As in if we see that the traditional values and their festivals have distinctive meanings which can cause to increase in rate of employ ability.
To conclude, there are certain situations where it can cause to aggression of community with another but we can stand united and always stand for what is right that's what makes us more responsible as citizens of our country which allows us to live in the cultural diverse place and still with motive of peace and harmony.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, still, well, as for, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89972144847 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64014005427 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518105849582 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0732154467 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.583333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124603801732 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535019833036 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278174258544 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0850341552504 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235270052676 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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