Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that students attitude is important. Discuss both the view and give you’re opinion.
Success in academics, according to some shrewd, relies on excellent tutors, whereas, other think it depends on student's motive toward studies, become contentious issue nowadays. I will discuss both the views in the upcoming paragraphs with my opinion.
To commence with, proponents of the importance of teachers think that instructor play fundamental role in the success of their students because pupils can learn easily anything from them. If tutors have incredible skills regarding teaching then every student can grasp knowledge easily and can get higher scores. Furthermore, most of the time children spend in schools so, it is the major responsibility of teacher to provide good education to their students. Moreover, a generous tutor know the capabilities of their tutees because he can analyse them on the basis of their performance.
On the other side, student's attitude also plays crucial role because devotion is important for every task, it help them to remain on a goal and help to achieve that success. In addition, motivation is necessary in every field so if students attitude towards study is not good then no one can motivate them even good teachers also. For example, a survey done by US reveals that topper of one university have paid full devotion by themselves and get regular motivation helps them to get higher scores, hence, mischievous students are incapable to get flying colours in results.
In my opinion, good tutors and students attitude, both have the imperative role to get success in education.
In conclusion, I pen down saying that teachers should provide good education to the students who are serious for their studies and motivate others to build their future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26181818182 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70059681191 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585454545455 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.5791291316 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.545454545 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188220648628 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082615786625 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558939533649 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127341020585 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0572086902992 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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