These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events.

Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Buying tickets to enjoy sports live and visit cultural places is become most compelling habit of many people.Some people take it as a negative development, however, I think it has various positive aspects for make sufficient budget as well as strengthen the economy of the nation. I will discuss some arguments to support my views in the upcoming paragraphs.

To commence with selling tickets is the best way to cover up the expenses of sport centres and museums. The more people purchase tickets, the more money will be collected, so renovation or operation of the sides will be easy to do. In addition to it, there are other lot expenses like salary of the workers, maintenance of the stuff, which are increasing day by day. Hence, it needs a strong budget which can only be possible with selling tickets or external eight. A survey conducted in India reveals, as an instance, the stadiums which are allowed to enter only after the ticket are more popular than other free stadiums just because of facilities available there.Therefore, to fulfil the demands of viewers and to serve with proper facilities, ticket price is mandatory in the era of inflation.

Furthermore, burden on government is also lessened by collecting money from the audience, instead it in your hands the economy of nation by recovering funds in the terms of tax. Because of every ticket buyer has to pay tax according to the price, which directly goes to the government, and this helps to build new buildings and to renovate old buildings. In the US the fund collected through tax of tickets is completely spent on rebuilding of museums and sports stadiums. Ergo, for the further development external Financial aid is necessary.

To conclude, by analysing the above mentioned reasons it can be said that if people buy more and more tickets have positive impact on both museum and nation.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, as to, i think, in addition, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95873015873 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73249069843 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.2468123195 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.166666667 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221229859324 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669011892139 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372777733419 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116825206348 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350829180593 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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