Many young people are leaving their homes in rural areas to study or work in the cities.
What are the reasons?
Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?
Migration into cities from the rural areas to find employment or good education become more common among youngsters. There are some reasons behind this phenomena and I certainly opposed the idea that advantages are more than disadvantages of this trend.
To begin with, there are several compelling reasons why multiple individuals migrating to urban regions. First and foremost is the availability of jobs. In metropolitan cities, there are plethora of workplaces where they can join, similarly due to good wages, they settled their life easier in the cities. Furthermore, many reputed institutes and colleges are only stated in cities and every parent want to give standardised education to their young ones, so they send their children to cities for study purposes, likewise, because of good transportation facilities, it is easy to go to the workplace or schools as well. Hence, it is also a major reason for the emigration of people.
Undoubtedly, increasing movement of people to the cities has numerous repercussions, due to overpopulation, sources are getting scarce, mainly food sources and land availability. Due to this, many people are unable to food and shelter there. Similarly, the rush of labour in the metropolitan sectors pavé a way to decrease work opportunities for the residents, not only this, but pollution is also intensifying due to high populous. Ergo, there are plenty of problems causing by this movement for people as well as for the environment. As an instance, Delhi is the prominent attraction for workforce and students so it is most populated city and according to recent figures, it is extensively dusty city in India.
To conclude, ample reasons are there for migration of people from the countryside area and no doubt that it has numbers of drawback. Facilities should be introduced by the government in rural areas for employment and education to avoid this increasing trend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, likewise, similarly, so, well, as for, as to, no doubt, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26623376623 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00794472843 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577922077922 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4300140203 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218990276513 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697829292271 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471485737506 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130374835778 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248065847575 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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