Some people believe that educational success is based on good teachers and others believe that it depends on students attitude. discuss both views and give your opinion
In the modern society, it is essential that everyone be educated. Some claim that tutors pave the way to bright students while others think that the attitudes of the students make them succeed India studies. This essay will discuss both arguments before reaching a recent opinion.
On one hand, it is universally accepted that tutors play a key role in their pupils' education. Students get to spend the majority of their learning career with their tutors inside classrooms. The role of a tutor is not limited to teaching their particular subjects. They actively interact with the students, giving close attention and support to each student equally in order to help them achieve good grades in their studies. Moreover, tutors share their experiences with students and they always help them guiding in their learning career. A survey conducted by Ace researchers forum in 2000 revealed that 80% of students age 12 to 17 agreed that tutors were of immense support to them in their learning career.
On the other hand, attitude of students definitely makes an impact on their learning career. Despite the good education, if the pupils lack good attitude, it is less likely that they will succeed in their studies. When a student is full of good attitude, it would be easier for him/her to focus on their studies and to obtain good grades. As a result, self confidence will boost and it will motivate the student to focus on their studies better than ever and subsequently they will get the maximum use of tutors, resources and study materials. In my experience, almost all the brightest pupils of my class and good attitudes. They were quite focused, driven and we're always eager to learn and help weaker students in their studies.
In conclusion, even though it is undeniable that tutors have a crucial effect on their students, unfortunately it is not enough for the success of their students. I believe that good attitudes are more vital than good tutors when it comes to a successful learning career of a student.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96470588235 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5364130191 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511764705882 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1032107739 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2941176471 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11764705882 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157000149094 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0580919203414 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542631520342 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113731242968 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400975839185 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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