Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In my point of view, libraries are tremendously important for every city. So, I really believe that investing heavily in it will bring uncountable benefits for population in general. Despite of all easy internet access today, I think that all these investments might be positive in many aspects.
There is a tendency to think that internet will make all books in the world useless. Although, I would argue that books are more crucial now than before. Indeed, find some information with Google or other tools online is faster than in past. However, people is actually losing their capacity to find deeper things. By this I mean that users are always looking for superficial information. Unfortunately, they are accustomed to have answers quickly in their computers instead of find reliable information on books.
Also, even if books become completely retired in future, I can see many different others benefits in communities with active libraries. I believe that books are not the only purpose of a library. In fact, there are many other program that might be interesting for the citizens. They create an environment proper to study and research as well. For instance, Winnipeg’s Public Library offers many services such as children program to beginning readers, social assistance and even English classes.
Therefore, the ideia to invest public money in libraries is, in my point of view, extremely positive to a city. So, they can combine several activities pretty useful for us, and they incentivize us to have more profound information in their books either.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'accustomed to having'.
Suggestion: accustomed to having
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...completely retired in future, I can see many different others benefits in communities with act...
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'programs'?
Suggestion: programs
... library. In fact, there are many other program that might be interesting for the citiz...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, really, so, therefore, well, for instance, i mean, i think, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1323.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20866141732 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7823840467 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.470787973 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6875 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6875 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181618207992 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542225505671 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419380430457 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107778155215 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327630354481 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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