Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport is a vital part of education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
While some people argue that it is not a good idea to offer physical education classes in schools, others say it is an essential part of education for students. I agree with the latter, because children must be provided with the lastest sport facilities in order to be healthier; both physically and mentaly.
On the one hand, supporters of not allocating funds for sport activities in schools assert that the benefits accruing from them are by no means negligible. To begin with, having been structured specifically for knowledge-based purposes, these educational centers should give importance to other main subjects. To put it differently, all they highlight is to foster students’ scientific knowledge. Take those prestegious private schools which just focus on the children’s theoritical lessons as an example; these students are bound to expand the science burdens’ due to their concentration on only sicence from the begining.
On the other hand, others put forward to the argument that physical activities are the major aspect of education. The most compelling reason justifying their assertation is that the more these young students take part in sports, the less they are prone to illnesses and depression. In other words, what these physical activities do is that they highly improve students’ well-being. More specifically, only those ones who have both healthy minds and buddies can be deemed as the future full-fledged workforce for the society. A good illustration of this is more and more governments in industrial countries shoulder the cost of greatly facilitating their educational centers by sport equipment.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that irrespective of theoretical subjects, sport lessons matter too. As these young learners are the backbone of the country, governmets should take the responsibilty to provide them with the required equipment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...ts’ well-being. More specifically, only those ones who have both healthy minds and buddies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46232876712 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06536311433 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0077243521 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186314431723 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597968955781 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489575711229 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109264763487 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342529419229 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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