Some people believe that it is important to give gifts to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show that we care. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Everyone feels special and happy when they receive gifts form their loved ones hence giving gifts has become an important aspect of life. On the contrary, few people believe that other than gifts, there are other ways to show affection. I will discuss both the views in the following paragraphs.
The tradition of gifting for special occasions like birthdays, weddings and other events has started from our forefather’s time. Today, we live in a materialistic world where care and affection are measured by the number of gift items received by friends and family. Also, people who live away from loved ones like to shower gifts for every special occasion as it is the best way to show them that they care. To exemplify, Children who live away from their parents, likes to send them gifts on occasion of Father or Mother’s Day or on their anniversary or birthdays, as he cannot celebrate with them inperson.
In contrast, few psychologists believe that gifts are not the appropriate medium to demonstrate love and care. Like taking care and supporting during the time of thick and thin or during illness, demonstrate respect and gratitude. To illustrate further on the above point, a daughter-in-law can show her caring nature by taking care of her in-laws need. Similarly, a son-in-law can do the same thing for his in-laws family. Not only this will not only improve the family relations but also help in strengthen the bond.
In my view, gift is important and should be given for special occasions like birthday, marriages and other events. However, showing respect, care and support is the best way to spreads happiness and to make your loved one feel special.
To recapitulate, gifts make everyone feel special, but at the same time relations improve and get strong through love, care, support and respect.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 311, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: son-in-law
...ake them feel special. The same way the son in law does things for her in laws family. T...
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Line 7, column 155, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...one feel special. Also, it is purely on individuals outlook on how they would like to revea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9964664311 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83242384361 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551236749117 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2426074655 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.769230769 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84615384615 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266779324683 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953751698514 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606288928515 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151919135555 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072103463874 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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