You are working in an international company write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation In your letter you should thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it tell the reason for your resignation confirm the time you are leavi

Essay topics:

You are working in an international company, write a letter to inform your manager about your resignation.

In your letter, you should:

• thank the company for the opportunity that you joined it

• tell the reason for your resignation

• confirm the time you are leaving

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter, to inform you that I would like to render my resignation from the post of Manager - Sales effective today 21st December 2019. I remember my first day when I joined as a Management Trainee, and now I am leaving as Manager - Sales heading the West Sales Division. Personally would like to thank the company and you for believing in me and providing me with challenging opportunities that has helped me to transform to a person that I am today.

As you are aware, that my parents live in India and my father’s health has not been great since a year. Recently, I was informed by my family doctor that my father is suffering from depression and needs treatment. I am the only child and now it is my responsibility to take care of my parents. Due to this reason, and with a heavy heart, I have decided to resign and be there for my father who currently needs my support.

I am aware that as per company policy I have to serve 2 months’ notice. However, I will appreciate, if it is possible to relive me by 31st January 2020. I have already prepared my handover details and if you want I could discuss the same with you on Monday next week.

I would like to thank once again to the company and you and wish you all best of luck for future endeavours.

Yours Faithfully,

Votes
Average: 9.1 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43621399177 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66946264639 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576131687243 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.9500881833 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0909090909 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243815765354 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932270548586 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0814183287075 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146444949423 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680252358801 0.0580467560999 117% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.