Today much of the food people eat gets transported from farms that are thousands of miles away. Some people believe it would be better for the environment and the economy if people only consumed food produced by local farmers. Would the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Today, there are plethora of food products of various countries are available in supermarkets. Few experts believe that availability of international food products is beneficial, while few opine otherwise. In the following paragraphs, I will enumerate both advantages and disadvantages of the topic.
Firstly, due to globalization, people can enjoy wide variety of food products from all over the world. To illustrate, Dragon Fruit which is cultivated in South East of Asia is not readily available in all leading super markets in India. Similarly, Alphonso mango, which is produced in India is called as the king of fruits, is relished by Americans, as it is exported in humongous quantity to Unites States of America. The major advantages of import and export of food products is that it creates a demand in other countries which in turn helps the home country farmers and boost the economy. Additionally, it also helps in strengthen the relationship of two countries who are involved in business.
On the contrary, there are few disadvantages like - the food products that are transported has to travel thousands of miles before it reaches the country which makes them costly and, in the transit, there are chances that the food products might deteriorate or get damaged. Furthermore, local shops will like to promote international food products over local food products as they can resale them at higher price in order to accelerate their profit margins. This will affect the local farmers business as their produce will not get preference. For example, In India, many farmers have committed suicide as the food products that they have cultivated is not getting traded in the market or even if they can sell, they end up selling it under price which dwarfs up their profits.
To conclude, though the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, but international food products should be available in market however, it shouldn’t affect the local food produce market.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, similarly, so, then, while, as to, for example, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24921135647 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93753279608 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542586750789 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4755929676 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3846153846 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194015772145 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702006806643 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474921403873 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116774387712 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221878592531 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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