Some people believe that its not necessary to have internet access to live a full life. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
The invent of communicating using computer devices has, overtime, achieved an important status in the way we live our lives. While some people are of the opinion that access to electronic mode of communication does not translate to a fulfilled life; I believe, however, that to be satisfied and stay in touch with the realities of life, continuous accessibility to the internet is paramount.
The world has become a global village, such that its difficult to get ahead without getting armed with the necessary information. One of the ways to attain happiness is the ability to connect effectively with friends and families. The internet has filled the void and definitely made human relations easier and animated. What else will constitute a gratifying life, if for example, the need to link up with others - get firsthand information that will land a dream job; join a growing network of business leaders and executives that will take my career to the next level - is lacking, either from the inability to be on the broadband connection or worse still not having it available for use. The business world has harnessed this tool and is thus making use of it effectively
Another point worthy of note is the satisfaction that the presence of the internet portends to social life. There is no doubt that social media plays a very important role in the modern society. To illustrate this, the amount of users of Facebook - a mobile site on the internet - has eclipsed over three (3) billion users. All over the world people send fecilitations; on birthdays; wedding events; obituary announcement, and in general, varieties of messages, photos and pokes just to indicate awareness and uphold oneness. Keeping in touch has become easier, faster and smarter. The internet has therefore been responsible for this actualisation.
To conclude, it is obvious that, our contemporary society has gotten more domesticated by the evolution of technology brought about by the internet. While thoughts are expressed by some and and aspersions cast in the level of necessity; I nevertheless, oppose the idea and submit that, to reap a socially and competitive gratified life, prolong and sustained non disruptive
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, in general, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14245810056 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92635328397 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617318435754 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.4555492311 49.4020404114 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.5 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5714285714 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151750003806 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040831729584 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406841211229 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0827643405302 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033463612336 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.