The rise of convenience food has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern lifestyle. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is important for people to consider that how to catch up with rapidly growing modern lifestyle. Convenience food has played a crucial role for people to keep this trend possible. In my opinion, I think that convenience food can bring about more problems for people compared to any advantages it might bring.
Admittedly, there are some basic benefits of ready to eat food for people who wants to put their steps in aligned with present lifestyle. Firstly, people can prepare those kinds of food in no time, and it is also effortless to be made. In other words, unlike freshly cooked homemade food, convenience food could be prepared rapidly and with less ingredients as well. As a result, spared precious time can be spent to do other pressing things such as with family, with office projects.
Nevertheless, despite the advantages above, I believe people would face serious drawbacks from convenience food consumption which has been preferred more in today’s contemporary lifestyle. One potentially dangerous problem is that convenience food is extremely pricey than any other available food in market or even than homemade food. As soon as people begin to have that food on daily basis, they will observe imbalance in their financial budget. Another obvious issue is that the presence of detrimental chemicals and preservatives make the food less nutritious. Moreover, digestive system of people would get affected from those hazardous preservatives added to expand it’s longevity. As per 2017’s data, for instance, 87% Americans had suffered from colon cancer and surprisingly the main factor behind this was the elements present in convenience food.
In conclusion, being faced financial crisis or got infected with life threatening illnesses far outweighs any of the minor benefits that could result from people being consumed convenience food in order to race with modern lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34437086093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81079606806 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612582781457 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3745100391 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5714285714 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2857142857 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.355787767636 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123078608366 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061001990826 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226787808164 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043245861917 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.