Some people believe that living in big cities is becoming more difficult. Other believe that it is getting easier. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is an undeniable fact that the industrial age has opened the growth of urban life. This growth has provided a tremendous effect on the human race by giving comfort and opportunities. On the other hand, it has opened up new challenges as well. In this essay, I will discuss whether living in a metropolis is more comfortable or more arduous.
First of all, we need to understand that life is a breeze when we have ease of access to the everyday thing, while on the opposite it will be strenuous. Now everyone knows the fact that compared to the small village or town, the ease of access to need like education, transportation, health care and many others is better than ever before in the metropolis. For example, the introduction of the rapid transportation system like the metro in Delhi helped to make travel safe and comfortable. Adding on, the improvement in technology in urban life inevitable. Introduction of high-speed internet in the metropolis; now people can work do a lot of things while sitting in the comfort of their rooms.
On the other side, if we talk about the deterrents of urban life. The first glaring problem that comes into mind is pollution, which is due to an increasing number of cars and construction activities. As a consequence, a lot of people living in urban areas face asthma and other chronic respiratory diseases. The second concern is that life expense in urban areas has skyrocketed in recent years, which reduce the standard of living in many places, and people are getting homeless.
To conclude, I would like to say that living in cities are more comfortable and will provide opportunities to full fill their dreams, but has got some problem which affects city life. Considering the fact that city life offers comfort, these challenges are not a show-stopper. The government can take necessary actions to mitigate the problems by implementing new rules and regulations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, well, while, for example, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90153846154 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90308956012 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553846153846 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0607819114 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5625 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133350170738 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0419693195457 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468079346525 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826413523356 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348439803263 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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