some people believe the media should be allowed to publish private information about people, while others are against it. discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Media plays a prominent role in exhibiting the relevant and current affairs of all around the world. With the advent of media technology, various new sources are incorporated,as a result they are viable to be at any place.Some people opine that the media should be authorized to publish anyone albeit others are completely against it. There are compelling reasons to contemplate about these arguments. I intend to delve into the both the opinions with suitable examples.
Without any qualms, news channels provide us plethora of information regarding every national and international events. Not only on the TV, but the news mobile application gives us privilege to grab all the knowledge in just one click. With the latest technology and gadgets they are approachable to new heights. To quote an instance, weather forecasting has saved millions of lives from natural disasters all over the universe. International and national news helps us to know about the other countries and our relations with us. Apparently, universe can be regarded as a global village now.
On the other hand, some experts believe that the media should be restricted to show the every minute details on their channels to the public. They think that it violates everyone's privacy and create a chaos in their lives. To add to it, family of criminal does not deserve the public humiliation but they media exposes every single information about their locality. Due to this, those persons face isolation to the outer world. What is more, encounter of the terrorist attack on Taj Hotel in Mumbai was supposed to finish early, but due to live telecast of the location of all the military, the terrorist were able to change their locations because they were also watching the live telecast of news channels. Ergo, it is not appropriate to budge into everywhere without their consent.
In conclusion, the influence of news media cannot be underestimated in the present era. Without any doubt, they provide a wide range of information about current happenings. But they ought to be very professional and aware about the consequences of giving the inappropriate information to the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, regarding, so, in conclusion, as a result, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16761363636 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.819321388 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579545454545 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9278324064 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7368421053 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5263157895 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.10526315789 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232371398698 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615208364801 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678545191128 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142636657973 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673503129937 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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