Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your own experience.
There is always a debatable issue that whether older people should provide assistance and financial support by the government or they should solely take care by saving the fund for themselves. Here, I intend to put forth my arguments by providing suitable examples.
At the onset, octogenarians are prone to various health hindrances and financial aid. Seldom are incorporated in the private work, so they are unable to save a sufficient amount of money for their future purpose. To add to it,parents often invest their life time savings to settle their children in the society and as a result they are left without any savings. To concur this problem, government should initiate to provide financial assistance to older people so that they can battle with their problems.
Moreover, geriatrics at their young age contribute to give taxes for the well being of country as a law abiding citizens. They represent themselves as a part of the economy and help in the holistic development of the nation. Thus it ought to be onus of the government authorities to facilitate them with their requirements at their older age.
On the other hand, elder persons should also be responsible to take care of themselves and try to save the hefty amount for their future purpose so they are not dependent on anyone.
In conclusion, authorities should be responsible to take care of their old generation as they are the roots of the upbringing of new generations.Also, they should be very active and aware about saving the money for themselves.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The adverb 'Seldom' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: Are Seldom
...us health hindrances and financial aid. Seldom are incorporated in the private work, so th...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , parents
...y for their future purpose. To add to it,parents often invest their life time savings to...
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Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: LIFE_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'lifetime'?
Suggestion: lifetime
...To add to it,parents often invest their life time savings to settle their children in the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...the holistic development of the nation. Thus it ought to be onus of the government a...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Also
...ts of the upbringing of new generations.Also, they should be very active and aware a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08203125 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84593837501 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5546875 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6875285355 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.272727273 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2727272727 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.81818181818 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.370539255831 0.244688304435 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136484368766 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097051919597 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213854776953 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579919311355 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.