the sports ability becomes a matter of concern for the society.Therefore, some people believes that natural abilities plays an important role to achieve success in sports field but other argue that it can be reached by doing hard work and practice. I will discuss my views in upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, lets analyse how natural abilities plays an important role to achieve success n sports field. Firstly, if a person born with inherent talent have not to work hard on one skill.to support this this point history has by many persons who taste the huge success in early of their childhood.For example, messi is the one of the finest players in football he as much strength to support a whole team on this own . So that is why he taste the success in his early years.
On the other hard, some mobs believes that success in sports field will achieve by hard work and practice. the main reason behind it is that person can plays with dedication and passion because these two things can help a lot to make their reams come true.For example, sachin tenduklar is well known player in the cricket and have no sports background. all of that he achieve is with his sweat. so it can seen the success is not only depend upon the genes.
To sum up, I would like to say that success can be achieved if some one wants too its neither depends upon on genes or aility that one have.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... upon on genes or aility that one have.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, well, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1135.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37398053046 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.2408172422 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.5 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203573522361 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0853149596609 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931691412652 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13444849481 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757587379938 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.35 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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