Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement
Globalization has opened incredible opportunities for society from accessing online education, purchasing products to travelling around the globe which can lead to people to explore many options before a decision is made. This essay will discuss the benefit of having many choices and explain why is crucial in this ultra modern society.
The advantages of technology and globalization enable the whole society to have a great access to many products that never happened before. In these days, people have accessed to latest devices and other modern products which allow them to explore and compare the market carefully before making a final decision. Besides this, the consumer's knowledge is expanded and exposed to many products that will give them a sense of learning new terminology, and open up new opportunities to grow. This knowledge can be shared with others in form of social conversation that lead to develop social skills and provide some positive outcome for people's social interaction because of the opportunity to communicate with others.
Furthermore, having many options to access a service or product open up a fair competition between companies and people are the most advantaged because they have the right to choose the product that people feel comfortable and satisfy for the investment they made. Previously, society had limited options to access a service and regardless they may not feel confident about a product they did not have other options to access it. Therefore, despite people criticizing of too many choices in this globalized world, the reality is that society enjoys accessing the market and purchasing the product they wished.
To sum up, it can be said that accessing many products and services enables individuals to make their own judge and investigation before making a decision. An informed decision is one of the most valuable aspects that should be considered when people explore the market.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: great access
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...explore and compare the market carefully before making a final decision. Besides ...
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...anies and people are the most advantaged because they have the right to choose th...
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...sidered when people explore the market.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, may, so, therefore, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1637.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29773462783 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76202169395 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52427184466 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.6742109496 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.818181818 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0909090909 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.63636363636 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167159349971 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0761297259732 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049969350967 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109655588951 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408294552154 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 50.2224549098 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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