There are many inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life? what are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
The advantages of the technology have enabled society to benefit from the invention of computers which play a key role in aspects of communitication and professional development. nevertheless, there are some detrimental consequences that are affecting individuals these days. this essay will elaborate the pro and cons of computer and this will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why computers are excellent tool, but the most conspicuos is that the whole society has found in these small devices a powerful instrument to communicate with the external world and allow individuals to improve their quality of life. Furthermore, computers facilitate organisations and professionals to undertake their work which is crucial for the all community. For instance, people can study and work from the comform of being at home and maintain close communication with their co-workers.
nevertheless, some people adopt a negative view and tend to believe the computers have played a negative and intrusive role in society because individuals have developed a serious problems that not only affect their relationship with others but also may create some health issues. Young people are the best example because they spend hours playing online games and isolate themselves from friends and family. Therefore, it can lead to problems to socialize and interact with others.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that inventions such as computers are valuable devices if these are used appropiately and wiselym, otherwise the consequences can bring negative consequences as a society as whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49802371542 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0442276168 2.71678728327 112% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 139.433497537 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584980237154 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.5093787037 50.4703680194 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.1 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.9669160288 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.25397266985 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 6.9802955665 43% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0643000361218 0.242375264174 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273138857209 0.0925447433944 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366922306162 0.071462118173 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0452265441661 0.151781067708 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351872067875 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.92 11.5310837438 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.94827586207 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.5123152709 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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