There are many inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life? what are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
Recently, the phenomenon of new inventions and their impacts on human’s life has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the creative invention is highly rewarding, such issue is regarded both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I profoundly inclined to believe that the inventions of the computer could be one of the pioneering inventions and this essay will analyze its pros and cons by providing some academic evidence before concluding.
On the one hand, from a technological standpoint, new inventions can provide the society with some noticeable benefits, which rooted in comforting their everyday lives by the advent of electronic communication as well as improving the infrastructure of their cities. According to an academic research conducted by MIT University, one of the prestigious University, the invention of computer in the late of 20’s century could be an epic innovation of all time due to its vast influential roles to all part of mankind’s life. Moreover, it leads to many developments in various field including medicine, space science, mathematics, physics, medical science, the Internet advancements and many other aspects.
On the other hand, such as any other technology, inventing new facilities may have some detrimental effects. Some opponents of the computer advancements argued that it brings some drawbacks to human life such as less physical activity as well as the lack of social behavior. Not to mention that many deadly weapons improve because of the downside of new technologies. From my own experience during my college, some students try to cheating on their research assignments by imitating from other’s hard work from the Internet.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that new innovative technology, such as computer, could be a two-edged sword and it is our responsibility to use them accurately.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 41, Rule ID: NEW_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'innovative'.
Suggestion: innovative
...To recapitulate, I pen down saying that new innovative technology, such as computer, could be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, well, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 31.9359605911 147% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 299.0 242.827586207 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2501100253 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 139.433497537 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588628762542 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 379.143842365 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.5024630542 132% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5421067285 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.363636364 104.977214359 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.9669160288 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.25397266985 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144269837708 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568815074027 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319277375995 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0851916287641 0.151781067708 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0483225139208 0.0609392437508 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 12.6369458128 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 53.1260098522 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.9458128079 137% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.15 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 55.0591133005 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.3980295567 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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