There are many inventions nowadays, which invention do you think is more important in our day-to-day life? what are the benefits and detrimental effects of it?
These days there is an ongoing debate between people about which invention is more important in our day-to-day life and it's benefits and detrimental effects. While it is possible to claim that inventions are make our life easier, my view is that inventions of computer has advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I shall explain my point of view by analysing both sides of arguments.
There are several reasons why inventions of computer is more important in our life. One of them is that people can buy,sell through websites. It can also be argued that people can communicate anywhere at anytime. It should also be taken into the account that people can transfer money anywhere at anytime,lot of applications helps for people to learn things eg Byju's.
Those who argue for inventions has more harmful effects have different view and say that it can't be actually a good thing. Firstly,it is claimed that laziness of human begins will increase. Then there are concerns about health issues like obesity,vision problem etc.
While there are strong arguments on both sides of case, my opinion is that inventions must be used in effective way to gain its benefits. I would strongly recommend that inventions of anything which is used in effective way will lead a good society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, firstly, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 8.36945812808 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 5.94088669951 202% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 31.9359605911 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.75862068966 17% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1079.0 1207.87684729 89% => OK
No of words: 215.0 242.827586207 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01860465116 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71404814406 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.580463131201 103% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.6157635468 173% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1281476906 50.4703680194 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9166666667 104.977214359 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.9669160288 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.25397266985 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.30472730888 0.242375264174 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106644432867 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.141624603074 0.071462118173 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171724287533 0.151781067708 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128587970931 0.0609392437508 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 12.6369458128 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.1260098522 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.9458128079 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 11.5310837438 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 55.0591133005 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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