Medical technology is responsible for the human’s life expectancy. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Human life expectancy has been seen as one of the best achievements of medical technology because people tend to live longer and healtier, regardless of their medical condition. This essay will provide some arguments of the substantial advances of technology that has benefit not only individuals but also as a society as a whole.
As the outset, there are numerous reasons why medical technology plays a significant role worldwide, but the most conspicuos one steam from the fact that people are able to manage their health problems and have a better quality of life due to the modern treatment that allow them to live longer and increase their life expectancy. some years ago, people used to die due to a lack of proper medication and treatment because little or nothing was invested on medicine. However, individuals are in much better position to survive an illness due to the advances of medicine.
Another key point is that the advance of technology in medicine allows people to access medical treatment from the comfort of their own houses which can be more convenient and practical in particular for those who feel uncomfortable to be hospitalised. Many cancer patients receive oral chemotherapy from home, following the specialist instructions and with the instalment of special machine to monitor their progress. Thus, the development on medicine provides some options to patients to access health care services.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that the development in medicine has enabled individuals to improve their quality of life and to access treatment and medication that were not available before wiht the main purpose to improve their health condition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1207.87684729 119% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23722627737 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81647091082 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 139.433497537 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554744525547 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 379.143842365 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.5024630542 146% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.4541803569 50.4703680194 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.444444444 104.977214359 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4444444444 20.9669160288 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.22222222222 7.25397266985 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146798616506 0.242375264174 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568534764156 0.0925447433944 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557719223517 0.071462118173 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936825051687 0.151781067708 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364644142132 0.0609392437508 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 12.6369458128 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.57 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 10.9458128079 148% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.94827586207 191% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.3980295567 135% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.5123152709 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 79.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 71.5 Out of 90
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