Parents should be held legally responsible for their children’s acts. What is your opinion? Support it with personal examples.
parents are responsible for the upbringing of a child and they have to hold the responsibility for their children's actions. this topic was always debatable and has now become more controversial. The substantial influences of a child's education can have a positive or negative impact on society. this essay will eaborate how parents may educate their offspring to prevent some issues in their future lives.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why parents may influence on their children's education to become a good members of society, but the most conspicuos one stems from the fact that parents need to provide strong values and this could be only achieved if they spend time together as a family, explaining what is good and wrong and the consequences they may pay if there are involved in negative acts such as robbery or stealing. Therefore, parents are the best role model and influence for their children and it is on their hands to help them to be a better citizens.
Nevertheless, other parents adopt an opposite view and tend to believe that schools are the responsible for their children's behaviour. this conception can bring detrimental consequences for their lives because teachers are to provide some guidance and support in their studies. However, the fundamental principles are held on parents.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that parents need to spend more time with their children as they are the main carer givers and in their hands hold the main responsibility to help their children to be a good citizens.
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...quences for their lives because teachers are to provide some guidance and support...
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...ity to help their children to be a good citizens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1314.0 1207.87684729 109% => OK
No of words: 260.0 242.827586207 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05384615385 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7665157631 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530769230769 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 379.143842365 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 104.556970117 50.4703680194 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 131.4 104.977214359 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.33497536946 150% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308033020647 0.242375264174 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128290321607 0.0925447433944 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907500076132 0.071462118173 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205531584512 0.151781067708 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328672945411 0.0609392437508 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.1260098522 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.9458128079 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.5310837438 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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