Some people claim that digital age has made us lazier, others claim it has made us more knowledgable. Discuss both opinios and example
The advantages of technology in particular the digital devices have provided to individuals some positive outcomes in their professional and daily lives. Nevertheless, others assert that these gadgets may bring detrimental consequences for their overall wellbeing. this essay will provide some reasons and this will lead to a logical solution.
As the outset, there are numerous reasons why digital era has benefit society in many ways. people can expand and enrich their knowledge through the technology because it allows them to read local and international news, and also they are able to undertake degree online which was unattainable some years ago. Therefore, technology through the computer plays a vital role inour lives because it enables society to achieve their professional goals.
Nevertheless, there remain some drawbacks, which can be overwhelm the potential influence of digital devices because people tend to have a sedentary live and limited their capacity to develop a critical thinking and socialize with others. Young people are the best example as many of them spend many hours playing games and eating in front of the computer which can have negative consequences for their life such as being obese and become lazy to think and socialize with others.
From what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that digital era has enabled people to improve their knowledge; however, on the other hand people are developing negative habits that can affect their overall wellbeing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, well, in particular, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 31.9359605911 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1207.87684729 106% => OK
No of words: 236.0 242.827586207 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40254237288 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66156679518 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588983050847 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 379.143842365 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.8009548849 50.4703680194 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 104.977214359 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.9669160288 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1111111111 7.25397266985 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0987694514435 0.242375264174 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0429802818307 0.0925447433944 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0257457112536 0.071462118173 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0657337255535 0.151781067708 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0203786586459 0.0609392437508 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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