In order to study effectively, it requires comfort, peace and time. So it is impossible for a student to combine learning and employment at the same time, because one distracts the other. Do you think this statement is realistic in today’s life?
it is said that to achieve success in studies, students should be focused on study rather than combine it with employment because both tasks are not possible to maintain. Nevertheless, people face some challenges nowadays as the cost of living and other financial presures demand them to work and study at the same time. therefore, it is unrealist to see individuals dedicated their entire time to develop their educational skills. this essay will elaborate some reasons which will lead to a reasonable conclusion.
At the outset, there are many reasons why study is crucial in people's lives, but the most conspicuos one steam from the fact is the precious time may enable students to develop their knowledge and skills which can be used later in their professionals life. To set an example, many young people can build their confidence to develop certain skills in computing for example and this may lead them to master the subject and to be in much better position to secure employment in the near future.
Nevertheless, some people have an oposite view and tend to believe that in this ultra modern society that requires to have a decent standard of living and to cover the dayli expenses, it is compulsory to engage in any type of job to pay bills and other expenses. therefore, it is unrealistic to be focused only on education, because people need to pay their own expenses such as rent, groceries and electricity and it is imposible to survive.
After what have been discussed above, it can be concluded that education and employment can be distracted but individuals need to have an income to cover their dayli expenses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1207.87684729 116% => OK
No of words: 282.0 242.827586207 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9609929078 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71006679792 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556737588652 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.5024630542 137% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.2530701093 50.4703680194 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.9 104.977214359 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2 20.9669160288 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161238035341 0.242375264174 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610224359836 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462927263817 0.071462118173 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743539960829 0.151781067708 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0621707846102 0.0609392437508 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 12.6369458128 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 53.1260098522 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 55.0591133005 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.3980295567 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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