With breaking industrialization in early 20th century and outstanding development of artificial intelligence in recent 30 years, the world sees a boost of needs and choices. Based on this trend, while some people claim that there are too many choices in modern society, i tend to believe that the choices are not enough.
People in most areas of the world are experiencing an overwhelming supply of various products, including food, clothes, tools and buildings. With increase in productivity and revolution in technonlogy applied to farming, we are able to enjoy the outcomes. In addition, much more untouched places are developed for residential or commercial purposes. It is understandable that people think we have too many choices.
However, in my opinion, it is still not enough. We should never stop our steps to explore more choices for human being. Looking at the history of human, it is the pursuit of needs and choices that motivated mankind to move forward. Being satisfied of the current state, we may face a possible risk to falling into a worse world.
Moreover, from my own experience, I don't think we are guaranteed enough choice, except on the materail level. The way we choose and we behave is significantly influenced by our surroundings. As a result, we are not that free to make our own choices. I believe that the aim of development of society is to explore and fulfill the inner needs of mankind as much as possible and to make most of our own qualities.
To conclude, i have to admit that there are much more choice nowadays, but i insist that more choices should be provided.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, while, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92673992674 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89254390372 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556776556777 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6967149605 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6666666667 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184868397387 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0661983622735 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901745648309 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.096762780484 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577550886081 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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