Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations, while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give the advantages of both and express your own point of view.
Diverging opinions have been voicing over, whether multiple short or one long vacation is beneficial for their well-being. I personally believe that one long break from school, is more advantageous rather than having short holidays couple of times. In this first I will explain both sides of the argument and then will prove my point of view with examples.
vacations for children inherently means trying to learn new skills, which are unorthodox in nature when compared to school studies.one can never fully grasp or train his new skills unless he or she is not given enough time to practice it without the interruption. this therefore can only be achieved through long summer or winter breaks regardless of the skill or the hobby a child has picked on. For instance, a part-time job or learning a guitar, both activities require persistence and sheer determination for a longer period of time, to completely master them.
On the other hand, some people argue that children’s progress should be monitored during the holidays.Furthermore, these people argue that since children are afraid of humiliation and consequences, if they under-perform in their vacations, this therefore gives them the unwanted motivation to learn new skills in their spare time.
However, no studies has ever proven the claim, that regular short vacations are more useful to children. On the contrary, we have thousands of examples of successful people who learned a great deal in their summer breaks, whether by learning new skills or starting a garage business through humble beginnings. Steve jobs is the prime example to be noted here, who had ample time in his summer college to invest his creative ability in his side venture.
In conclusion, I believe that students should be given the conventional longer holidays to nurture their creative ability by letting them learn new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24092409241 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87304297438 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627062706271 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.8398548795 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.363636364 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1818181818 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233806718141 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807277045403 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621405085909 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127955682025 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0648893497139 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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