Some people believe that there will be a reduction in air travel in the future. Do you think that this trend is a positive or negative development?
Lately, we have seen a drastic shift in the way people travel. There are numerous reasons behind this shift and some economists believe that this change will reduce the number of travellers by airplanes. In the following paragraphs we will share the reasons for the reduction and the positive and negative development of this trend.
Last two decades ago, some people preferred to travel either by airplane or train. This was due to unconstructed roads that were connecting cities which made road travelling a nightmare for travellers. However, today the urban development commission have ensured that all cities highway roads are constructed which in turn makes the travellers experience memorable and reduces the chances of road mishaps. Furthermore, today younger generation who are travel enthusiast and crave for adventure prefers to travel by road i.e. either via bikes or cars as they can enjoy the scenic beauty which is not possible in airplanes. Additionally, due to the technology advancement, countries have introduced Bullet trains. These trains reduce the travel time by 50% compared to the passenger trains and are also economical in cost compared to the airplanes. To exemplify, a bullet train named Gareeb Rath is introduced from Mumbai to Ahmedabad in India. Ahmedabad is famous for manufacturing of fabrics and cloth traders from Mumbai often travel to Ahmedabad for business. Statistic shows that post the introduction of the bullet train, there has been considerable decline in airplane bookings as most of the traders opted for bullet train.
Another key reason why people assume reduction in air travel in near future is due to the air ticket price which have drastically increased over the years due to the increase in the fuel prices. Over couple of years the crude prices have undoubtedly increased and in order to keep up with the economy the airline companies had to alter their fare prices which subsequently has affected their business.
To recapitulate, basis the above reason, it is derived that reduction in air travel will have a negative effect on the airline industry, however, it will not affect the travel industry and the country’s economy as there are alternate modes of transportation developed to meet the needs of the various class of people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...opment commission have ensured that all cities highway roads are constructed which in ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1930.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79260737542 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537837837838 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.2920277591 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248517849546 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864576783682 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090918700932 0.0667982634062 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178810185924 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110125951843 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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