Some people believe that violent films are bad for you and encourage people to be violent, others argue that violence and films are unreleased because violence existed before films.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
We all love to watch movies, these are known as great time-pass and stress reliever now a days. However, it is commonly believed by many that violent films are the source of encouragement for people who act violently while some other people believe that there is no relation between violence and films. I agree with the later group and in this essay I will discuss why I completely agree with this thought.
It is undeniable that violence existed before films. There could be many other reasons for our wild behavior but not movies. Movies are the great form of entertainment, we go to watch movies to distress ourselves or to rejuvenate our mood hence it will be really unfair to blame films for our violent nature. There is an immense change in cinematography from last few decades. These days movies are directed and produced not for the purpose of earning revenue but their content is based on social awareness and biography of celebrities. Thus movies encourage us to become like our best-loved actors and boost us to become a productive member of the society.
On the other side, I agree that there are some violent movies which I think is necessary to differentiate between positives and negatives. In every movie, there is a villain and hero, so it is up-to us whom we imitate. None of the movie forces us to do violent acts or behave negatively in the society. Every movie has a positive message to learn. In short,every movie has both the sides, positive and negative and it is completely our choice to love the bad-boy or the good-boy of the story. Also there are many other significant reasons for increased rate of violence in our society such as bad-company, poverty, unemployment and many other social curses. In a survey conducted by Harvard University on ex-criminals during the year 2010, the result show that 40% of the total population did not watched movie ever in their life due to poverty or any other reason, this shows that if man wants to be violent, he do not need encouragement, he would do violent acts just out of any thing.
To conclude, Although violent films leave some remark on children but movies are the great source of entertainment and information these days. In short we could not say that movies encourage people to be violent. Moreover, movies encourage us to achieve our goals, be a responsible citizen of the country and also make us aware of common social curses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, while, i think, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 419.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77088305489 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52432199235 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65258116793 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513126491647 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 654.3 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.6378041196 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.210526316 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0526315789 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84210526316 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27997889513 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899831066162 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100704685061 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187599692932 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547181272461 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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