Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

Essay topics: Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable; others, however, think it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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There are a number of people believe that watching TV is something good and it makes life more interesting, while others counted it as a waste of time. I totally disagree with this Statement, therefore, I will explain in details why watching TV is important nowadays.

To begin, watching TV is one of means that makes people know about what is happening around them not just locally but around the world though. For example, there have been some channels introduce news about other countries such as; CNN, and BBC, these two are presenting daily international news from all the world. As it updates people about the progress of countries, either economically or culturally. In addition, it gives opportunities to people to recognize traditions of other people.

However, it can't be counted as waste of time, TV might be used to distribute education in Histroy as well. Furthermore, it has provided some special programs for children education, it could be like cartoon programs, as it encourages immature to adapt with the outside atmosphere.

Additionally, Some channels might build the thought of children to improve their ability needs in such fields. However, there are a number of channels have integral part in distributing people's opinion to the world, so that other individuals could take it as an advantages. Whereas, there would be special programs to develop mom's ability about how take care of their immature by sharing other people's experiences alive via TV.

In brief, channels have more advantages than disadvantages.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in brief, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21285140562 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85674030071 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610441767068 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.8968429438 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.166666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243783492899 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868620682319 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876180244625 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127817935102 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0938164663595 0.056905535591 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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