Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military. Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people subscribe to the belief that no woman should be deprived of equal rights and job opportunities, while others still believe in stereotypical ideology of the patriarchy society. Female group should be treated equally when registering for police or army jobs is a subject which is both supported and refuted by many. Both sides of this essay will be analyzed before a viable conclusion is drawn.
Firstly, it is commonly known that women and men do not share equal amount of strength and stamina by nature. For instance, there are various harsh and aggressive tasks are carried by the officials during selection process of army, speaking of which is not a piece of cake for the all the women. And not just selection program, but post training of selected candidates is also held in extremely rough environment. Unfortunately, young girls cannot perform in such conditions since they are of soft and gentle nature. Thus, the idea of not giving the preference to women in the army related jobs could be slightly plausible.
However, on the the other side of the argument, it must be remembered that there are several operations in the armed forces which women can do better than men; such as nursing, ammunition management etc. For example, needless to say women can deal with medical aide or wounded soldiers far better than male counterparts because of their caring nature. Undoubtedly, whether military, politics or management, female have equal potential to perform their duty in many other areas. Therefore, it is clear why the idea of giving an equal importance to female applicants in the police and army related jobs has garnered support.
In summary, both sides of the argument regarding non-discriminative approach in the recruitment of the police and army have strong support. However, it is clear that women are capable of performing numerous duties as good as men, hence the idea of considering them less suitable for the police and army jobs cannot be fully supported. As such, it is predicted that gender biased tendency will no longer be exist in the near future and equal respect and consideration will be given to both men and women.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, regarding, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in summary, speaking of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0055401662 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73265012548 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565096952909 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5407535044 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.466666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387253094226 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115557209834 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07727383816 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231836744014 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608521737853 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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