Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career.Give reasons for your answers and include

Essay topics: Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work. So which do you think is the best way to choose career.

Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Nowadays, people are more career oriented. Everyone prefer life with better career opportunities along with handsome salaries. In my opinion, anything chosen with liking will always prove out to be better in life. We can only upscale ourselves if we enjoy the work we're doing.

Today, inflation has become a serious problem in everyone’s life. Due to high expenses, wage earning is necessary. A person living below poverty line is facing multiple problems like unable to buy good food or unable to feed their children etc. Due to monetary issues, people would not be able to study and making suicidal commits. But, a person is facing such issues because s/he nowhere have an interest in their work or doesn't want to do work.

If a person enjoy doing work, then only s/he can earn immensely and live with a better life style. For instance, considering a great business leader N.R. Narayana Murthy, chief emeritus of Infosys Ltd, always believed on one concept "simple living high thinking". When he started his career, he had only Rs. 10,000 which he borrowed from his wife. He loved the work he was doing and done with complete dedication Today, everybody knows his as the person who firstly done the evolution of Information technology in India. His learning, perseverance and dedication towards his interest took him towards the heights of glory. Today, this person is the member of committee which discusses the economy of India. These qualities have automatically provided him a better social status and ample amount of money

In compendium, social status and salary are important but a person working with commitment will consequently get benefit out of it. The only ways to do great work is to love what you do because it is the only perspective which can truly satisfy you.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...facing such issues because s/he nowhere have an interest in their work or doesnt wan...
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Line 3, column 429, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...where have an interest in their work or doesnt want to do work. If a person enjoy d...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, so, then, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01666666667 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63744615532 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626666666667 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5616518494 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5294117647 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6470588235 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47058823529 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154531052167 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048230556831 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438953217227 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103934085014 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527733594254 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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