Some people choose a career according to the social status and salary it will give
them. Others choose a career according to whether they will enjoy the work.
Which do you think is the best way to choose a career? Give reasons for your answer
and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In recent days, while some people prefer to work what they enjoy most, other argue that it is vital to choose a job that could provide generous social level and salary. I believe that choosing a career depending on how it offers on social and financial scale is very important.
First, choosing a job for its provided social benefit is an essential element. This is because it is well known that people with high social level win the respect of their surrounding community. In addition, they would be accepted among various levels. For example, a man who has been working for a prestigious organization can easily enroll his kids to any desired school or club.
Secondly, a powerful social status can be beneficial when it comes to choosing your spouse. To elaborate, a groom with a respectable position might find it easy to choose a suitable mate that matches his need and requirements. On the other hand, it might be a difficult competition for a low profile young man to get a bride from a higher social class.
Moreover, a sensible paid job is an advantageous for young employees at their early life stage. As a consequence of our modern life expensive demands, it will be righteous decision to choose a highly paid career. For instance, it can cost you an arm and a leg to purchase a new car especially at the beginning of your career path.
In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I think it is important to select a career that could present a safe social and financial life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... safe social and financial life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7566539924 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68866195743 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.6728564165 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 96.2307692308 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324312842611 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104206965974 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592379655438 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170086325183 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462006573261 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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