Some people claim that censorship is necessary because there are too many undesirable contents in the mass media, while others argue that it will hinder information freedom. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
whether censorship is necessary or not is still up for debate. The opinion is divided when it comes to discussing about the benefits and the drawbacks of censorship. While many tend to highlight the necessity of a sort of control on outrageous or offensive contents, on the other side, voices warn about the hidden dangers behind this practice. this essay will analyze those two opposite points of view and propose an intermediate solution.
censorship has been a common practice for several decades.Mainly linked to governments, officials or politicians, censorship is actually an instrument that is widely used in various fields, like movies, PC games, or newspapers. Its aim is basically to protect some categories of people from contents that are labelled as potentially harmful or objectionable contents. To give a tangible example, movies are rated according to the amount of scenes of violence, sex or substance abuse or other matters traditionally inappropriate for children or teenagers. this rating system allows parents to decide whether a movie can be watched by their children or not. it is a form of censorship, which is in this case has a positive effect. In some countries , however, government use censorship as a weapon to silence opposition and to inhibit freedom of speech. some people also claim that newspapers, tabloids and mass media should always be free to publish their contents, underlining the fact that they publish what the readers want to be published. Though this may be right at first sight, it must also be noticed that is necessary to draw a line, because if it is true that newspapers should be free from government control it is also true that they do not have the right to slander or defame people with false affirmations. when it happens victims of calumny has therefore the right to sue newspapers and to be refunded for the offence received.
In conclusion, censorship is a valuable tool when it comes to protect children from contents that can lead to violence or improper actions. it should however not be used as a weapon to wipe out dissents and to steer mass media in the direction indicated by the government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, first, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, sort of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1803.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00833333333 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90749484828 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 562.5 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8863975149 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.2 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200216018494 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606345654966 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0328899555266 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125476050715 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327631719356 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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