Some people consider price as most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Many people believe that when buying a product like a cell phone the crucial thing to consider is a price while others who think that service is the most important thing. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of giving the best service instead of price.
To begin with, sometimes the price of the product will become an important issue while buying a product. Cell phones like Apple and Samsung are very costly but not many people are affordable to buy these cell phones because of their higher prices. Higher the price of mobile phones higher the features we will get in the phone. For instance, a cell phone like Apple has launched his latest phone that is I phone XR with the price of 1 lakh.
However, the price is not only a thing to consider. There are many other places where money has no value. Here I am going to talk about the services provided in the hospitals. Their medical service in hospitals is a crucial part in regulating the hospital standards and improving the patient's health. If the hospital staff is not following proper protocol like hand hygiene then how the patient will safe from the infections. In addition, if in an emergency the hospital ambulance could not reach at the accidental at the time than what is the value of money invested in the hospital
To conclude, the price of the product may be important when that thing is too costly but in comparison, I must say that the service is the crucial thing to be considered.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'patients'' or 'patient's'?
Suggestion: patients'; patient's
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ards and improving the patients health. If the hospital staff is not following pro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1201.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58396946565 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35191632536 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519083969466 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4051103169 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.083333333 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.356602721637 0.244688304435 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121428438551 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113836733418 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227543989804 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134451625997 0.056905535591 236% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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