Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film stars, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Celebrities are treated as god among their fans, as a result they receive high paid adverts, movie contracts and sports club contracts. Undoubtedly, I do accord with this notion. However, there are plethora of occupations in our society that should also be paid handsome salary or money.
To embark on, the entertainers always bring happiness to our life, and give us a reason to enjoy or celebrate a moment. For instance, if a song from albums of Badsha - a renown Punjabi pop singer – is played in a party, it electrifies the environments, and everyone ready to dance. Therefore, any live event of Badsha will be costly due to humongous fan following. Similar is the case for movie stars and sports persons. But, it is known to all that only a few of entertainers get high remuneration, not all singers or sport persons.
However, there are various other occupations in our society that have immense importance in our lives. Doctors are treated as "Live-God" by human, as they save our lives. Hence, most of the doctors are earning well. Secondly, scientist and engineers invent many important stuffs for us such as computers, smartphones, internet and so on. No one can deny the importance of these products in our today's modern life. Can we imagine our life without internet or smartphone?
Without all these gadgets, our lives would be slow. Lastly, environmentalist and social works play vital role in the development of a nation. Environmentalist does keep eye on climate changes, and always inform us the impacts on our lives. For instance, recently an environmentalist has recognised exact reason of drought in Assam, a state in India, and proposed useful remedies. Because of his effort, Assam government has able to tackle a possible digester. But, are the doctors, scientists, environmentalist and others paid enough, even after their remarkable contribution towards society? The answer is a definite "NO" as compare to celebrities.
To recapitulate, although there is no harm at paying high money to celebrities, but the other occupations such as doctors, scientists and such must also be treated equally in our society, and must get handsome remuneration.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18820224719 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16053785318 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609550561798 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.6323898129 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.9545454545 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149916992455 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.039265641421 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365875220215 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0866356519397 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.051969294855 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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