Some people prefer cold weather conditions while others don't.
Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
It can be seen that, nowadays, few men and women like to be in cold atmosphere whereas some people do not consider to love in cold climate. Although, tourist can be attracted in cold climate, I believe that, cold weather does not allow people to do activities outside. So some people do not give preference to cold weather.
On the one hand, tourism is one of the pivotal reasons why some people prefer cold climate. That is to say that, certain types of sports can fascinate the tourists only in cold weather conditions which utterly helps local residents to generate revenue. For example, according to knees survey in India, economy of Leh-Ladakh was marked as highest in winter due to humongous rush I'd tourists to do various types of sports. Moreover, people can not only procure money from tourists but also can love a healthy life because of quick upsurge in immune system. However, I believe that despite of having ample of advantages,other weathers are more suitable for people.
On the other hand, cold atmosphere does not render the liberty to go outside the home can be a cardinal reason why people do not like cold climate. This is because, people have to live in the premises die to extreme cold outside which can be a major obstacle esspecially for geriatric people to go outside and have fun. To illustrate, one of my friends had migrated from India to Russia three years ago and he is still struggling to adapt in that cold environment. In addition to that, people can not enjoy the immense pleasure of wearing fashionable attire because people have to wear winter coats which makes them to avoid cold climate. Hence I believe that, due to its plethora of disadvantages, people do not give preference to cold weather.
In conclusion, though, people can create income in cold weather, I believe that, cold weather is not suitable because people would be abided to go outside and it is recommended that, people should not live in cold conditions because one will not be able to enjoy outside beauty.
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...which makes them to avoid cold climate. Hence I believe that, due to its plethora of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79656160458 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56226794741 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489971346705 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6366902644 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9285714286 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235435851266 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113390146937 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891573564407 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173734364005 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0365979105593 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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