People usually spend their spare time by engaging themselves in leisure activities, where some prefer to use technological one while others do not. I, however, believe that technology free hobbies are much better and healthier.
majority of the people these days uses gadgets such as mobile phone, laptop or iPad in their free timings. increase influence of online social media has indulged people to keep themselves busy with their mobile phones. for instance, at my workplace, whenever my colleagues get some time for relaxation, instead of talking to each other they all take out their cellphones and open their facebook or wtsapp account and feel fresh by doing this. therefore, surfing internet with the technological item is the most interesting hobby found everywhere.
On the other hand, there are still few people who prefer not using technology rather go for other options like reading books or doing any recreational activity in their spare time. such activities refresh the mind and body and one forgets all worries of life for few hours. For example, I feel more relax by reading a good book or go for a walk in the park to get myself relaxed and feel fresh, this is one the most energetic leisure activity which I believe people can do in their free time and get benefitted as well.
in conclusion, though the majority utilizes their free time by using technology there are still few people who opt for old versions of the hobby which are far more better in my opinion.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...old versions of the hobby which are far more better in my opinion.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90118577075 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50500600206 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588932806324 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2040759365 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.0 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130536461007 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611645024996 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388968674177 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101763153643 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423595346862 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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