Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Few people hold this opinion that living in an apartment is more beneficial, but there is also other side of this argument where people like to stay in their separate homes. I believe that the advantages of living in an apartment outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, this essay will highlight several disadvantages of living in a private home. Secondly, I will also discuss some advantages of living in a house. Both benefits and drawbacks of a house will be addressed in comparison with the life of apartment.
Living a life in a separate house does have downsides. These days majority of people to live their life, solely depend on jobs, and saving enough money so that individual can afford a house is not that simple. The worth of houses are going up day by day and a very few people can manage to live separately. For instance, in Pakistan the price of normal single level house ranges from PKR 20 million to PKR 25 million, whereas the salary of an average employee is between PKR 80000 to PKR 100,000. So in this salary bearing all household expenses and saving enough money to buy a house is impossible. Moreover, if we compare the system of apartment we will see that there is a private security system in all apartment and all the residents of an apartment contribute to pay for this security system; however, in case of a house there is no security system, unless the is willing to pay for it, which will be an extra cost on his pocket. There are some other facilities in apartment life, for instance, play area for kids and swimming pool facility which is usually not available in a house. Furthermore, in an apartment usually the community is responsible for all kind of maintenance services and cleaning but in house these are also responsibilities of an individual living there.
Despite the above arguments, there are certain benefits of living in a house. People like to have their own privacy, which is only possible in a house. In addition to this, an individual can have his own parking space and can also open a private garage if the person is a car enthusiast. There is no need to take elevators or stairs to reach your room; this is a real problem for old people in apartments. In house, the responsible for the maintenance and overhauling of equipment; he does not need to wait for the community to solve it, he will resolve all issues as per his convenient.
In conclusion, it can be inferred that disadvantages of living in a house outweigh the advantages, due to the above mentioned arguments. I strongly prefer to live in an apartment.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...parate house does have downsides. These days majority of people to live their life, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2123.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 452.0 315.596192385 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69690265487 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77255645016 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453539823009 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 700.2 506.74238477 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4151931894 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.15 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385732988604 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141677431646 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111518061328 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274099345875 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124962185923 0.056905535591 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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