Some people prefer to live in a house, while others think that there are more advantages living in an apartment.
Are there more advantages than disadvantages to living in a house rather than in an apartment?
It is a debatable issue when it comes to choose house or apartment; every aspects have their own benefits. Although few of us prefer to live in house, majority of us love to live in apartment these days due to several reasons, and I prefer to live in apartment as well, and will explain my views in further paragraphs.
To embark on, population and cost of living are increasing day-by-day exponentially. A stand-alone house is no longer affordable to vast of citizens. That is why people are moving towards apartments. Apart from this, there are several other benefits. Firstly, the maintenance of a house is neither so easy nor so pocket friendly for middle class people. In apartment, all of our monthly maintenance charges and efforts are divided among the society members. Secondly, security is a major concern for all house owners, especially in India. As several people are staying near to each other in apartment, the chances of theft is very low; anybody can notice any unusual movement or unauthorized person entered into the society, which is little bit difficult in independent houses. Moreover, apartment can afford security guards in addition to installation of surveillance cameras, as per head contribution would be nominal. Lastly, various occasions can celebrated in an apartment in more enjoyable ways in comparison to staying in houses. For instance, Holi -a well-known festival in India, can only be enjoyed with a group of people, which not possible in house, at least not at large scale.
However, staying at home has some own beauty. One can organize any function or festival without others approval or concern, whereas in apartment one must inform his/her neighbor; otherwise he/she may complain due to noise. Another advantage is that we can plan additional activities such as gardening if one possess an independent house, which is restricted in apartment.
To recapitulate, although individual houses have few advantages, the merits in staying at apartment such as cost effectiveness, sense of security and enjoyment during festival time have outnumbered the idea to live in house.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, apart from, at least, for instance, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1777.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19590643275 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91605505906 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8030793898 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.529411765 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52941176471 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250532280173 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648066477714 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0557709908039 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14659924702 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480763388998 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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