Some people prefer to relax by doing physical activities, while others choose mental activities (crosswords, chess etc.). Discuss the both views and give your opinion.
Opinions are divided on whether one can stay calm by physical activities or by mental activities. I believe that both of these exercises have distinct advantages and the choice depends on personal interest.
Spending one's leisure time in sports or other forms of physical activities such as yoga may be relaxing, especially for people who are sporty and love to be outdoor. This is due to the fact that physical workout stimulates the growth of happy hormones called endorphins in the human body and post-workout one feels extremely positive and calm. People with an interest in the above mentioned recreational activities may also find pleasure in meeting like-minded people probably at playgrounds or at gyms and widening their social circle. Finally, asking these individuals to find pleasure in other brain training games would pressurise their mind than putting at rest. Therefore, it is fine for someone who likes physical activities to relax in his own way.
In contrast, mental activities such as playing puzzles, chess, and reading books may be the better option for intellectual minds who feel better by training their brain. The evidence for this can be seen in the fact that solving a puzzle or knowledge gaining paves the way to more satisfaction and contentment to these people at the end of the day. As a result of this, their sleep patterns are improved and they feel rested. It is also true that challenging their brains with such mental exercises also promotes cognitive health, and logical and reasoning ability. As for a wider social network, though studious people may have fewer friends than those who spend time in physical activities involving a team, the restful mind is more important for an intellectual one.
In conclusion, all that matter at the end of the day is the peaceful mind and soul, and different personalities find it in different activities according to their interest. Sporty people find peace in the physical activities. On the other hand, studious people tranquillize themselves with mental activities.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, so, therefore, as for, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 334.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15269461078 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76442656168 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535928143713 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5563457902 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.733333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195940953198 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074433352986 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522828126823 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135305479597 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230959385012 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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