Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree.
In this competitive world, majority of the retail stores choose to sell international meal to create uniqueness and beat their competitors. However, certain demographics of the society argue that these food outlets should promote the sale of a regional meal but I strongly accede with former notion and this essay will discuss plausible points to conclusively support my opinion.
Firstly, every region has its own specialty of cuisines and I believe that food is an important source to get familiar with the lifestyle and healthy habits of other countries. This trend will also encourage the local people to learn others cooking style to prepare such dishes at home. For instance, Italian cuisine is considered to be one of the healthy meals among the world due to its cooking style and olive oil used to cook food. Availability of such meals at retail stores opens up wide variety of options to stock up one's healthy eatables. therefore, food outlets should promote such healthy cuisines.
Another reason to promote the sale of international meal is the convenience for tourists. There have been plethora of instances recorded from the survey conducted on international excursions and majority of the tourists urged to have their own country food in other nations while their excursions. Furthermore, some tourists are identified to be allergic to certain food items. Therefore, availability of such feasible meal options is good for foreigners to enjoy their visit in other countries.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that instead of imposing restrictions related to the sale of meal preferences , considerable autonomy should be offered to restaurants to serve their patrons with variety of dine in options.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25179856115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81886368451 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.1936422644 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134748896751 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0525041396063 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429911175412 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762038996346 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023722014914 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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