Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Essay topics:

Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays big supermarkets have been introduced online food items shopping. There are few people find their convenience in shopping food online while others enjoy going the supermarket. This essay will discuss why going supermarket for purchasing food is always better than ordering food products online.

Some of the people who want to save their time are shopping food online. According to them, ordering food online with a few clicks is the best way of shopping. Targeting these people, one of the biggest supermarkets in India has come up with the idea of food delivery in three hours with attractive discounts and offers. Online food shopping avoids so many hassles and it is time-saving.

Another set of people always prefer going to the supermarket for buying food items. They find pleasure in doing so and hence they allocate some of their time in supermarket visits. For instance, picking fruit or vegetable from a variety of items. It gives a lot of choice to the customer and they can specifically chose what they need. It is a unique as well as special experience and people enjoy it.

Online food shopping is changing the lifestyle of people these days. People tend to buy online rather than going supermarket. This essay discussed why shopping food items online is convenient for few people but going supermarket better. In my opinion, people should spend some of their time for going to the supermarket and buy food items themselves since it gives pleasure as well as a nice experience.

Votes
Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...han ordering food products online. Some of the people who want to save their time are ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 315, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'choose'
Suggestion: choose
... the customer and they can specifically chose what they need. It is a unique as well ...
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01587301587 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60891498324 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507936507937 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8803917009 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.397336918875 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148627063811 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102714506947 0.0667982634062 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255231386235 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453995773177 0.056905535591 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.54 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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