Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Executing and performing repetitive tasks is the habit of many. While few believes trying out new thing can yield fruitful results. In my Point of view opting for a different approach would be advantageous.
One section of society believes in following the daily routine and general approach throughout the life. This practice helps people in easy execution of tasks and place them in comfort zone. In my opinion this approach would make life boring and one would not able to achieve any progress. For example, typically a person prefers to get a job after completion of his education. This will only help him to just earn and secure bread and butter for his family and he will follow this routine during whole lifetime.
While some people believes trying out different things can only bring the change in society. I strongly believes this kind of mind set only can help us to progress in our life. Some people preferred different approach in their profession and they achieved extra ordinary success in their life. For instance take the example of steve jobs and Bill gates. Without their creative thinking world would not have seen apple and Microsoft footprints in their life.
To summarise, conventional and preferred approach would only help us to live our life steadily in comfort zone. I believe this will only help to fulfil person’s necessary needs and would not earn any achievements. However in my opinion adopting to changes can not only help to bring prosperity in one’s life but also help in more betterment of mankind.
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Essay evaluation report
in comfort zone
in a comfort zone
While some people believes
While some people believe
I strongly believes
I strongly believe
Sentence: I believe this will only help to fulfil person's necessary needs and would not earn any achievements.
Error: fulfil Suggestion: fulfill
flaws:
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 259 350
No. of Characters: 1254 1500
No. of Different Words: 146 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.012 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.842 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.425 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 68 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 47 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 24 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.188 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.111 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.438 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.329 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.526 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.102 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 65, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... repetitive tasks is the habit of many. While few believes trying out new thing can y...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...this routine during whole lifetime. While some people believes trying out differe...
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Line 5, column 105, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'believe'
Suggestion: believe
...bring the change in society. I strongly believes this kind of mind set only can help us ...
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Line 7, column 220, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ds and would not earn any achievements. However in my opinion adopting to changes can n...
^^^^^^^
Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'so', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'kind of', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.252631578947 0.247107183377 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.150877192982 0.155533422707 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0736842105263 0.0946595960268 78% => OK
Adverbs: 0.059649122807 0.0501214627716 119% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0666666666667 0.0437548338989 152% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.112280701754 0.122226691241 92% => OK
Participles: 0.0350877192982 0.0403226058552 87% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.55015140011 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0315789473684 0.0326793684256 97% => OK
Particles: 0.00701754385965 0.00163938923432 428% => OK
Determiners: 0.0631578947368 0.0861772015684 73% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0456140350877 0.021408717616 213% => Less modal verbs wanted (like 'must , shall , will , should , would , can , could , may , and might').
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1554.0 1933.35771543 80% => OK
No of words: 259.0 316.048096192 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.0 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20517956788 95% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.332046332046 0.374742101984 89% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266409266409 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.200772200772 0.203846283523 98% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108108108108 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55015140011 2.80594681477 91% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.037074148 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555984555985 0.56093040696 99% => OK
Word variations: 55.3342386509 60.7387585426 91% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 23.653752345 49.517814964 48% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.125 127.492653851 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1875 20.7743622355 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.625 0.814263465372 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 42.8284266409 49.1944974215 87% => OK
Elegance: 1.44303797468 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193028330119 0.332605444948 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0784348151136 0.102741220458 76% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0633031808504 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.501841212981 0.534860350844 94% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.111553509691 0.148594505496 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823634284077 0.134430193775 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0401437695032 0.0742795772207 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.313828318205 0.324371583561 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0649212183608 0.0638462369009 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133608282731 0.228012699653 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386615647989 0.058150111329 66% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 15.0 10.4468937876 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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